I have been working on a new movie and it's a joint project. This movie has many weird aspects to it, but I feel that it has some appeal for many different types of people. I am going to be doing these updates as the movie continues and I even have one here for you today. I am actually hoping for some feedback and possibly a couple suggestions. Your preview today is a short part of the script. I am stuck on a cliff hanger and am hoping that some can give some feedback. Well here it is.
Malcolm: Stop (they get their last few hits in) Revolver you already knew you weren’t making it out of this alive. You’re in enough of it and you open your mouth. Even in the face of death your pretty ballsy. Well know I’m going to show you some manners. First I’m going to beat you, no scratch that I’m going to beat both of you. Then revolver your special treat is picking up the boy’s tab. Prepared to be drugged then drowned and right before you die I’m going to pull you out. The whole process should take about three hours, but were not going once through you’re on rinse dry and repeat why?, because you spoke out on behalf of the boy. Finally when I feel you’ve had enough I will take you out to the edge of the woods with 10 mins to run and hide. You aren’t going to make it out. I will have supporters waiting for you at the river bank’s edge. You’re both not going to make it, but you’ll have different points of view on your deaths. )A montage with the sugar sugar song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1D5H6qJVy9o. The montage ends with us looking through the fox’s eyes and fading into black as though he is blacking out. When we see the next images it is off the two individuals bound by ropes. Malcolm is in front.) Ah revolver you had so much potential, but you messed up you could have asked for anything even a new start, but you came in and said no. That was the one rule about your job no no’s. (Malcolm goes into his coat pocket and pulls out a box wrapped in ribbon. He opens the box and pulls out a knife.) This was for you, but I never did get to give it to you on the account of all the stuff that happened to your job and well your forced resignation. But I believe in a fair chance or at least slightly trying to balance the scales in some minuscule way.(Malcolm goes behind the two and cuts the rope) Here have this small token, consider it your death card. (Malcolm hands revolver the knife and as soon as he does guns from other mice appear out of the dark pointed at him.) You have ten minutes to do what you can, but you won’t make it out alive tonight I can reassure you. Now before you run. (Malcolm forces the two onto their knees and ties blindfolds on them. He then goes over to revolver whispering.) Hold on tightly to that knife. (Malcolm kicks Merlin and he is seen rolling down the woods grunting in pain every time he hits a rock or a tree.) Your turn revolver. (The field mice start laughing and he is kicked in a different direction now separated from Merlin. We see that revolver has stopped rolling and removes the blindfold. He stands up and examines the knife. He then pauses and looks forward quietly. In an echoey type sound we hear light footsteps and conversation going down a hill. The sound of distant running water and the sounds of a teenager sobbing. The fox quiet as ever starts running in the direction of the sobbing. We see that the source of the sobbing is
I have been working on this new animated movie. Please tell me if you're interested + would want to watch. Platform?
— Ken King (@Wizzickken) March 29, 2016